HarryControl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[X-Naut vs Anime Kitty ^_^]

umm...

The animation was okay, good actually. But overall, make your movie a bit more sensible.

[A Koopa Carol]

That's it?

This has some potential, but needs work. There wasn't really any ending at all, almost as if you cut the story off and could be longer.
I like the idea though.

[New Super Mario Bloopers]

okay...

You got the better of me because I like Mario and also the third blooper was funny. But I've seen better bloopers. With a little more imagination and practice, and extension it may turn out to be good. My first suggestion is to make your movies a bit longer.

[Mario Snowball Fight]

funny

I was going to give a 4 or perhaps a 3. But it was funny.

[Super star wars]

Improvement required

Yah, working with Flash is not something you quickly do and finish. The animation wasn't the greatest and spelling corrections is definatly needed. Like art, it requires some critical quality work, not to say you didn't put work into this. But this is almost like a quick sketch as oppose to a beautiful masterpiece.
If you take you're time and practice, then perhaps you will able to make something
that catches more viewers. ;)

trashcanman responds:

super mario

[Goku VS Vegita]

Okay...

Like Matt300 said, you're not bad for someone who doesn't use Flash much. If plan on making further Flash projects then continue to make improvements and take some advice from reviewers to your projects better. ;)

[Nintegaball GT: Ep. 1]

Its okay

For the most part, I liked it. Good Story.
However, this isn't quite original due to the makings of SMBZ.
I know making Flash projects isn't just a cake walk but maybe, just maybe, you could twist this it something awesome. But anyway, I like to see how the next episode will turn out! ;)

Tip: For movies with lots of dialog such as this one, I would recommend doing something like actionscripting the dialog box so that the reader (user) has the ability to proceed to the next dialog box when he or she wants to.

[Zelda: Heart for the Hero]

Great!

Not the longest Flash I've seen. But I applaud your good work in this. How long did it take to do this?

[goku vs super mario bros]

well...

I liked it, really, but this isn't exactly an original idea.
If you're going to make anything close SMBZ then include a story.